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Chapter

(1st Draft)

Today, I feel exhausted because I’ve stayed up painting for my art class. I stayed up 3 days straight. I haven’t been painting for 72 hours; I have been taking breaks reading The Source Magazine, Vibe Magazine, watching MTV2 music videos, and Vh1 Soul. I’ve been drinking coffee none stop and because I hate starting a project and not finishing it after I start it. It’s Saturday night, 10:01pm and by 11:00pm this project will be complete. I only need to add the clouds. I say these things as I think to myself. I figure I could go to sleep tonight and finish the rest of the picture tomorrow. I steps back and looks at the painting with the XXL Magazine in my right hand. I look at the painting and say to myself, I know I’m going to get an “A” on this project.

As I stand in the art studio, I look around and I ask the girl next to me, what she thinks about this painting. She doesn’t hear me when I ask, because she was listening to her mp3 player; so I ease up to her back slowly, takes my left hand and slightly takes out one earphone, then I whisper in her ear, her sexy can I get your opinion on my painting. She puts the paint brush down, turns around and says “Mr. Platinum…” she licks her lips, and then says “yeah, what you said?” I look at her and into her eyes then say “what you think of my painting?” She says “it looks inspirational like your words in my ears. Are you coming tomorrow?” I say “thanks, yeah in the evening, I’m tired like craziness.” Then she says “okay, I will be here waiting for you, for us to go on our date tomorrow.” I say “date? We have a date tomorrow? Where we’re going?” She says “I don’t know, but I want to be your girl though.” Then she looks at me up and down biting her lips. I say “word, you wanna be my girl and you wanna go out on a date with me?” She says “yeah, is that a problem?” I say “nah, it’s cool because you look like Kimberly Denise Jones.” She smiles and says “okay, I like that. Can I suck ya neck now?” I laughs and says “that just gonna lead to more things and I’m too tired to empty you at the moment.”

She says “do you know my name?” I say “um… it’s Ciaraica?” She says “my friends call me Ciara cause how I dance and my name is Erica.” I say “oh, okay, I got it. I need to go to sleep because I’ve been up for   3 days straight.” Erica says “dam, 3 days.” She kisses me on the cheeks and says “I’ll see you tomorrow.” Then she continues her painting. I pack my things and leaves. As I’m leaving, I put on my Dr. Dre headphones and press play, as I’m listening to Notorious B.I.G. – Juicy, I thinks in my mind, wow, I tired and bagging a dime piece. Erica is sexy and is a straight “A” student and she wants me.  When I get in my dorm room, I put my bag down and lay down onto my bed. I fall asleep in less than 2 minutes.

As I slept, after about 10 minutes, I wake up in different clothing. I get up and say “what the fuck, who the hell came in here and changed my clothing?” I looked out the window and everything seemed the same. I went outside and looked around, and then I go down the stairs to the lobby. As I entered the lobby, Erica approaches me and says “hey Mr. Platinum, I want to dance with you.” I looks at her in confuse, thinking about who dressed me. I stared at her thinking. She grabs my hand, pulls me to the center of the lobby and starts to dance, but when I looked around, I notice everybody looking at us. I say “where’s the music? I don’t hear any music.” Erica turns around and says “don’t worry about the music,” then she sucks my neck. She starts to back me up into the wall. In the background, I hear people saying “yo! Son! Look at this shit, I bet you they fuck right there!” As the people talk in the lobby in the background, I feel a hand going in my zipper, then grabs onto Diesel. I say to Erica in a whisper “we should go into my room.” Erica say “okay, let’s go.”

When we enter my room, she rushes me, but before I could say “what the fuck, who the hell changed my room around.” She forces her tongue into my mouth and as I closed the door falling backwards onto the bed and she says in mid-air before my back hits the bed, “empty me now.” I say “okay, but how you want it?” She thinks, and then stop kissing on me but her hand stays on Diesel, squeezing him. She says “I want it to feel real good, but with a sting that makes my eyes go back into my head and makes my mouth watery like snot running from nose. Do you know that Diesel is the size of a Comcast remote?” I say “oh… word…” She lifts up her skirt and I start to kiss her and sucking on her bottom lip like Jolly Rancher candy cane. I take my middle finger, circles the lips of the pussy with slightly pressure. As I do this, she pulls Diesel out of my pants and says “put ya Comcast remote into my charger, so my charger could cum with battery fluid all over the bed.” I say in a whisper into her ear “ready or not, here I come, you can’t hide.” Then I eased Diesel into the between the opening of the circle which her legs was hiding so secretly. I pushed slowly in deeply and pulled out not all the way, but to the tip then did that repeatedly as I rubbed her cunt slowly to stir up juices in her mouth.

I grabs her tits with such passion in aggression to make her moan like a stutter but within a singing note; then I starts to lick her nipples with a slight bite, glazing the tip of it; a couple of times to make some juice to leak out. She turns towards me then lustfully kisses me with her breathe breathing between each 10 seconds. After 30 seconds, I tell Diesel to penetrate harder and faster, but with the same stroke and motion of going in and out. She grabs me intensively and holds me. She whispers in my ear… well, she tried to whisper in my ear, but as she tries to talk, I would stroke harder to slowly then deeper in 1 push so a word sound like a singing note, then she would try to repeat it, but with a sharp lustful moan would break up the word. On the first climax she squeezed me, but I decided to switch up the stroke & to stopping short, pulling half of Diesel out and I would do that for 30 seconds, then with a harder to deeper one stroke. As I licked her neck & sucked her to mark my territory, she would have multiple climaxes and through the constant penetration of persistence. She glanced at the clock and says “it been 2 hours so far.” I say “oh, so do you want to cum more?” She thinks, as she thinks, I pump harder to make her have another climax. She says “ahhh! Ohhh! Hmmm! Harder!” I goes harder and harder, then faster to faster then I repeats the process, she say “I can’t cum no more…ahhh, awww, ohhh my God,” then she cums a lot more. It felt like a bucket of warm water got dumped out all over Diesel, my legs and the bed. She screams slightly, but in a singing note slightly in a moan of unforgettable pleasure. She says “did you come yet? Ohhh, my!” I say “do you want me to come now or you want to more?”

She says ”…” in a moan, I slows down to drive her crazy, but I pulls out then just penetrate in and out with Diesel helmet. She says “ohhh!” and climax again and again, then she says “what time is it?” I say a word, but every word, I stroke harder, so my words later could have meaning and painful pleasure in her thinking later, when we’re talking. I says ”I… don’t… know… I… think… it’s… been… four… and… a… half… hours… I… think… or… five… and… a… have… hours… I’m… thinking… or…” She stops me from talking by kissing me, so I starts penetrating harder in and slower out repeatedly then she sucks my tongue like my bottom lip and says “ohhh! I can’t cum anymore!” then she cums again, she says “I’m drained but I’m still horny and…” I looks at the clock and says to myself in my mind “okay, I need to nut then pull out, I feel like I’m laying in the Atlantic Ocean at the moment. I decide to come in 10 minutes later, but right before bust I pulled out and busted it on the floor. I stand up then look at Diesel and say “are you tired?” Erica says “I can’t move, I never did it for that long before. Hmmm… hmmm… guys normally last for 45 minutes or an hour. Ahhh… hmmm… I’m still cumming and you’re not in me right now, hmmm… I think you broke my water pipes, but it feels so good. I think I’m gonna fall asleep right here.” After she says that, I say to Erica, “so you gonna stay here and take a nap?” She says “yeah, I’m hmmm… I’m still dripping and I can’t go down stairs in the lobby turned out.” I say “I’m not a bragger, so I’m not planning to go to the lobby; I’m going to Art Studio, okay?” I look at Erica, and she sleeping. I continue to get dress and when I finishes, I looks around and says “who been in my room, people touching my shit. Dam I had my room organized in a certain way. I can’t be leaving my room door unlocked anymore.” After I get dress, I leave. As I’m leaving my room, I lock the door then goes towards the staircase, to go down to the Art Studio.

When I reach the stairs, I see’s my friend Corey, he say “yo! Plat, everybody talking about you and Ciara. Y’all fucked?!” I says “nah, we kissed a little bit and we watched a movie and she was telling me she tired from painting, so I told her to sleep in my room and when I come back, based on how we feel, we’ll fuck.” Corey looked at me then smiles and says “Yo! Son! Stop lying! You could tell me. I know you didn’t do that with no Ciara, right?!” I say “nah, but on the real we ain’t do shit, we just laid on my bed and she fell to sleep in my arms, like what was you expecting?” Corey says “I don’t know, maybe some booty grabbing, nipple sucking, shit like that!” I says “I know, that’s a good idea, I’m gonna do that tonight with her, cause right now she sleeping.” Corey laughs and says “whatever son, you know and I know you don’t be bragging and probably feel if you told me, you’ll be bragging and so she sleeping huh?”  I say “yeah, she’s sleeping. Is she with me now?” He looks says “let me come in the room to see.” I say “I would, but I’m kind of pissed at the moment and shit.” Corey looks into my eyes to see if I’m serious or not, then says “why? Hold up, let me guess, she wouldn’t give none and fell asleep.” I say “son, you still on that? But I left my room door unlocked and when gets in the room, furniture and my bed have been rearranged. I’m like who the hell been in my room. Did you see anybody come out my room recently?”

He looks around to think, licks his lips then says “nah, like when did this happen?” I say “I don’t know. I wakes up, I got clothes on that I didn’t slept in. Me and Erica comes upstairs…” He says “hold up! Hold up! Yo!” He gets close to me and whispers, “Erica? Erica? Erica? Son, you calling her Erica?” I say “that is her real name why?” He says “yo, I heard enough, I’m out. All I know if I see anybody coming out ya room in the future, I’ll find out what’s good. Now you’re calling Ciara, Erica all of a sudden. Hmmm, you might not say shit, but that’s all I need to hear, but sine we tight like brothers from another mother, I suggest you call her Ciara, so nobody will get curious and start their own rumors. If you don’t want nobody in your business, don’t call her Erica around people, you could do it when y’all alone, but other than that, I’ll let you know about if I see anybody enter in or come out your room.” Then he leaves. As he takes his keys out his pocket to open the room door, I says “iight good look lata.” As I get down the first flight of stairs, I hear Corey yells out “about what Plat?” As I looked around before answering, I don’t see anybody, so I say out loud “for both topics!” Corey says “iight, I’m not gonna say shit! Lata!” Then his room door closes.

I continue to go down the stairs. As I’m passing through lobby to get to the art studio, I see some guys. As they see me coming, they approach me and say “yo, you fucked Ciara?” I say “nah, she was on her period.” They say “word, son?” I say “yeah, we watched a movie, in the middle of the movie, I was kind of horny, so I decided to rub her butt, but I felt a padded item, I was like what’s that? She was like I’m on my period, but I really likes you are you mad, so I was kind of mad, but I played it off cause I didn’t want to mess up the opportunity to fuckin the shit out of her, ya know?” They was like “dam, son…she was on her period Platinum? But yeah that happens sometimes with girls, so did she just come on her period today?” I say “I don’t know, but she wants to do a relationship with me. Does she be messing around like that?” They say “nah, she gets straight A’s” I say “oh word! For real, I’m a straight “C” student and shit, ah man.” They laughs and say “yo where you heading to?” I say “I gotta finish my art painting in the Art Studio, maaannn, I got to try to pull a “C” in this class, and I keep failing the fucking projects or getting a “D” and shit.” They say “dam son, well check you later.” Then they leave.

I say “iight, 1.” As I continue to walk it seems like every other girl I pass looks at me. I don’t know if it’s cause of the bags under my eyes or cause they seen me with Erica. I pay no mind to it, and then I arrive at the Art Studio. When I enter, nobody there, nor is there any canvas. I say “what the fuck!” Then I looks around, as I look around in shock I hears my voice echoing. I decide to start walking, hope to see somebody wearing headphones that didn’t hear me. I figure maybe if I see somebody, maybe there’s an explanation of what had happened to painting; but as I walk, I see nobody. When I gets to the other end of the studio, I stands there thinking that maybe I’m still sleeping, but I feel like I’m awoke. I pinch myself, but nothing happens. I pinch myself again, but after a few minutes of standing there looking around. An idea pops into my head; maybe the teacher took them and putted it in the gallery in the library. So I instantly get excited and jog to the door. I open the door and my stomach starts growling. I realize I’m hungry. I start to walk out the Art Studio then down the hallway. My stomach the starts bubbling, I says “ah shit, I gotta shit now, what the fuck.” So I change the plan temporarily to go back to my room. As I’m jogging through the lobby, in my mind, I want to sprint to my room, but I don’t want nobody to notice me as I’m passing through.

When I enters the lobby, I jog slowly, as I gets in the middle Erica friend Ashley says “Hey Mr. Platinum! Can you spare a second?” In my mind, I says “hell no! I got to take a shit, I’m about to shit on myself!” As I looks at her standing there thinking. She walks to me and says “so what you about to do?” I say “well… Well… I’m about to do some jogging around the school to get ready for track season in a few months, wanna jog with me?” Ashley laughs and say “well no, but I have something else in mind like can I tell you something on my mind in your room?” I says “um… well I would, but Erica a a Ciara is in my room at the moment sleeping, but she just texted me that she’s ready to go to the movies.” Then my stomach makes a loud vibrating noise. Ashley looks down and says “are you okay?” I say “yeah, that’s my phone vibrating.” I pull my phone out of my pocket and looks at it as if somebody actually texted me. I say “oh, Ciara wants me to hurry up because she has a class in 3 hours.” Ashley says “oh, so can I come?” In my mind, I know I have less than 2 minutes to get to my room. I say calmly, “when we come back down the stairs, just come with us.” She smiles and says “okay” then I start to jog again, when I get to the staircase to go up, I run to the top, I say “oh shit” under my voice because I’m hoping  Erica is still sleeping. I enter the room; she’s in the same spot. Then I rush to the bathroom.  After about ten minutes, I leave the bathroom then walk over to Erica and kiss her lips gently. She wakes up and kisses me back, then say “I gotta meet up with my friend in the mall.” I say “are you talking about Ashley?” She says “nah, we supposed to go to the movies later.” I say “the movies… um…” She says “I want you to come with us. It’s going to be 3 of us and you. I hope you okay with being around girls.” I say “I don’t mind, so you said yesterday you want to be my girl right?” She says “I wasn’t on campus yesterday, I think, but after you doing this to my body, I want to be your girl now, so is you my man now?” I say “yeah, but you wasn’t on the campus yesterday?” She says “I can’t remember, my body feels good, but empty. I want to sleep here all day, but I have to meet with my home girl I ain’t see in years. Her sister could sing pretty well, wanna meet her sister or is you happy with me?”

She sits up and looks me into my eyes and waits for an answer. I looks into her then looks at her diamond in her nose then kisses her and says “I’m happy with you but if you wasn’t on campus yesterday and didn’t see me then how you about the emptiness I do?” She looks at my lips then slowly looks up to meet eye to eye then she kisses me back and says “you told me last week?” I say calmly, but in shock “last week? Are you serious?” She say “yeah, but our teacher Tom said we could hand in our painting project on Thursday instead of Monday because everybody wasn’t near done.” I say “huh… wait a minute, what day it is?” She say “Sunday, I don’t know the date, but why?” I say “cause…” then I looks around then say “Cause my mind feels confuse from the softness of your skin, sweet scent from your neck and hand squeezing my Comcast remote, it’s like… I feel like I want to say marry me.” She smiles then kisses me. She say “hmmm…it’s like you’re the perfect combination of things, but keeps it hidden so well that not even just hearing your voice or reading your texts, that I would of known that you could put it down as I said before we started the intimacy of sensual seductive sensation penetrating my inner circle and not touching, but glazing my skin. It was a tickle, but with a sting on the lower end that left ya lips on top of mines…” She licks her lips slowly and says “when we get the chance to be alone again, I want to express my words to you in my sexual intellectual way okay?” I smiles and says “okay, you gonna take shower?” She says “yeah, but I don’t have any clothes here, so I’m gonna call Ashley to tell her to bring my clothes over as I’m in the shower okay?”

I say “okay, I’m in the room to watch TV.” She says “okay.” 10 minutes passes and I hears a knock on the door, I goes to open the door, Ashley says “hey Mr. Platinum where’s Ciara at?” I says “come in, have a seat.” She enters the room and says “is Ciara in the shower?” I close the door, then sit down and say “yeah, you could go give her the clothes in the bathroom if you want.” She goes to the bathroom and knocks on the door. As Erica taking a shower, she hears a knocking and thinks it’s me, so she steps out the shower and opens the door slowly. As she opening the door she says “I am dripping wet, can you lick me empty, Plat?” When she opens the door, steam enters the room and Ashley runs into the room. I know this cause Ashley told me afterwards. As we leaving the campus, Ashley says “who car you want to take, mines or yours Ciara?” Erica says “mines, cause I want to impress my man.” She looks at me and says “is this okay with you Mr. Platinum?” I look at her with a look that causes her to walk over to me and kisses me. Ashley says “get a room! And invite me dammit!” Erica laughs. I look at Ashley and she pushes out her lips like as if she about to kiss me then say “Mr. Platinum, don’t be scared, I’m not gonna hurt you.” I say “don’t start nothing you can’t finish.” We get in the car. Ashley says “so what that supposed to mean? Don’t make me ask Ciara how you is okay, so stay in ya place.” then she smiles. I say “that’s so cute, like is that statement supposed to scare me?” As Erica backs up the car, then starts driving out the parking lot, Ashley says “Ciara, how is he from 1 to 10, be honest.” I turn around and roll down the car window. Erica says “well, he’s my man now, but 1 to 10 is for guys that fit inside that category.” Ashley says “word, he’s that good?” Erica says “I know I usually share my guys, but this one, I think I’m gonna have to be selfish.” As I look out the window, I can’t believe what I’m hearing. I’m trying to stay out the conversation because I rarely bite my tongue. I’m not shy, I’m quiet. Erica looks at me, I continue to look out the window, but I could see her on the corner of my eye. As we stops at a red light, she looks then I looks in the mirror to see if I could see where Ashley looking. When I look into the mirror, she looking in the mirror at me, I laugh then turns to Erica, and then says “what up? The light green, is you going to go?” She glances at the light and says “yeah I see it, but I’m waiting for it to turn red again because I want to ask you something special.” Right before the light turn’s red, in my mind, I say “ah shit.” The light turns red; Erica says “can I have the red light special with you?” I say “you don’t have to ask, why you feel like you have to ask?” Erica looks at me then say “well, I know you probably feel guilty for hearing me say I share guys, but the thing to it is that me and my girls don’t be passing guys to each other like you think. How you think we do it?” I says “to be honest, I really don’t think nothing of it.” Ashley says “good, would you have a problem doing me?” I say “well, I can’t be in a relationship with Erica and do you, but what probably can happen is if Erica want to consider me just a friend instead of her man, then it would be possible.” Erica says “see, Ashley? I know his type and I ain’t trying to be selfish because I want to, I just don’t want to say he’s not my man or not be his girlfriend anymore.” Ashley says “okay, we a few minutes away from the mall, in a couple of words, tell me something, that he did to you that don’t place him in the 1 to 10 category.” Erica says “he empty me.” Ashley says “empty, what’s that?” I say “ah shit, I got to get out of here.” I say this in my mind as they continue to talk. Erica says “well, I didn’t want to cum no more, but the funny thing to it is that, when he finally pulled out, cause I couldn’t do it anymore; as he stood up, I still was cumming and shit.” Ashley says “oh shit, you gotta tell Critiquely.” I say “who Critiquely is that the person real name?”

Ashley say “nah, but that’s what we call her cause she will let a nigga know he ain’t shit.” I say “I’m guessing you don’t like me Ashley.” Ashley says “I like you so much that I wanted to bag you, but I never see you. Every time I seen you, you was on the move or with your friend Corey and I wanted to approach you by yourself, but Ciara got to you before me, but Critiquely is mad cool, it’s just that she might want to critique you when she meets you.” I say “well, I’m gonna just be me, Mr. Platinum; cause my critiquing could be some shit too depending on how I’m approached.” Erica says “listen he’s mines, we ain’t Brandy and Monica okay.” Ashley says “you is so funny, but none of us had been empty before, so if he did it, we could put more pressure on the guys at school and you know we love to blaze.” I say “hold up, I don’t want no parts of that cause all that gonna do is make guys hate me because what y’all saying.” Ashley says “so what suggest?”

I says “well become their friend, I mean girl and then don’t give him none for a week, but within a week, talk about empty shit and things getting empty; then say hey babe, I was wondering, could I ever stop cumming? He would be like huh? In confusion, then say I want to try to cum so much that can’t cum no more. The guy would be like well, I think I could do it, but where did that idea come from? Then you say I just was wondering and plus I’m tired of trying new positions all the time. It’s always the same effect, I just want to try something different, want to do it? He’s a guy, he’s not going to turn fucking down, but without really thinking about it, he going to end up putting himself in a position and when he finally realize he can’t do it, he gonna come up with something or a reason to breakup with you, but try not to breakup. After a while, make little joke remarks, that’s gonna make him want to work harder and if he can’t do it he gonna stop calling you and come up with a bunch of excuses to not see you, then when y’all chilling in the lobby, then you blaze.” Ashley says “daaaammmm! I like that though, so do you have a secret to doing it?” I say “I don’t know, I just got tired of doing the same thing other guys was doing cause their bragging is horrible, but I don’t say nothing about it, so I decided to be inventive and come up with something that no guy could keep up unless they use a pill.” Ashley says “dam!” Erica says “yeah that’s deep, but we’re here and there goes Critiquely waiting for us.”