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The Party Chapter

 

Thirty minutes later, we arrive there, I says "that was quick." She says "yeah it was, no cops be on the highway during the day time." I says "oh." Critiquely calls her sister on the phone and says "we here, what entrance we should enter from, cause Erica brought her man Mr. Platinum." Her sister says "yeah, Ciara told me that he was coming to the party tonight, I want to meet him, come to the back. I left the golf karts in the front, so drive that to the back." She says "okay, I'll see you soon," then hangs up, Critiquely says "iight, we taking the kart to the back, they in the conference room talking about a tour in July, yall ready?" I says "I'm a bit still sleepy." Erica says "okay, well I'll get you a room afta you meet her sister and husband, cause afterwards, we need to get our hair done, pick out some clothing, figure out what shoes we're wearing and get our nails done, you sure you don't wanna come?" I says "oh, I'm definitely sleepy now. I don't even want to watch yall do that." She says "okay... well, lets go then and I'll talk to her sister about getting you a room to sleep in." I says "okay."

Critiquely drives to the back, as she driving, she says "so Mr. Platinum is you impress?" I says "yeah, this a nice house." Critiquely says "house? This ain't no house, it's a mansion." I says "they sleep, eat and shtt here right?" She says "yeah, what you tryin to say?" I says "that a mansion is another name for house, ya sista have a nice house, so stop complainin, I'm guessin you ain't get none in a while." Ashley says "uh oh" Critiquely stops the golf kart and says "say that 1 more time." I says "you have to pardon me, cause I'm still sleepy and a bit cranky at the moment, I'm so sorry, I'm sorry cause I don't want you to drive of this cliff and I'm in the kart, you is drivin quite fast, do this golf kart have a jet engine? This shtt movin a bit too fast, but I see ya skills hittin the corners and turnin, I was shock you made this shtt drift. I know it ain't no cliffs aroung, but I'm just shocked by the drift you did 30 secongs ago. I'm impress, I wish I could of seen how you was driving, when yall was racing on yall way here." She says "I been practicin that draft for a while, cause sometimes me and my brother-in-law play tag in the golf karts and he always catch me in that area, so do you think I'm nice at drift?" I says "you probably turned it at 70 mphs. Now I know why this shtt movin so fast. He must have skills." She says "okay, well we have to get out anyway, cause it's right there." I look over and say "oh, ya timing is surperb. I'm impress again." She says "okay lets go in."

As we entering, I says "so do I need to impress still, cause I'm not planning to, so don't ask me to." Ashley says "why you so defensive?" I says "cause I think yall think yall gonna treat me like the white boy in Training Day, I'm Shaft, get ya mind right, fuckin wit me." Erica says "If I didn't have to get ready for tonight, I would be takin a nap wit you." Critiquely says "yeah, and my sister don't have any water beds either." I says "well, I feel bad for her, but don't tell her that, I have my own way how I wanna impress her that yall won't catch it, so can I get that opportunity?" They looks at me and Critiquely says "okay, we'll leave alone in there Shaft." I says "my name is Mr. Platinum, Solange." She says "say that shtt 1 more time." I says "I would, but we in here already so try to be nice again Ms. Knowles." Her sister and her husband turns their head like what's going on over there. Erica says "Hey, yall this is Mr. Platinum and this Critiquely sister Beyonce and brother-in-law Sean." I says "hello, I don't listen to music much, but I hear yall is good at what yall do." Sean says "yall could sit as we discuss things." Beyonce says "I want a mist of water falling from the ceiling, control over the wind, on the stage, you could choose the stage effects cause I want to control effects the fans experience, when Sasha performing." I say, but it slips out "that shtt sounds hot, oh pardon me, was I not suppose to talk?" Sean smiles and says "you... you have any opinions on that B?" She says "what's ya name?" I says "Mr. Platinum, but I never directed a concert before, I just was saying your ideas was hot that's all."

Beyonce says "okay, but we putting 150 million dollars in this tour, I just would like to know what ideas you have, but you not directing, it's me, if I like ya ideas I will tell you and after the On The Run Tour, if I used it, I will tell you." I says "okay, that takes off the pressure, but are you okay with saying my ideas Sean?" Sean looking down at his iphone reading something, he says "go ahead, she's running the show, I'm just giving her my ideas too," then he smiles. I says "okay well whats songs are you going to perform and am I able to hear it now?" Beyonce says "yeah, here's my laptop of songs, I'm going to perform." I says oh, let me see." I looks and listens to it for and ten minutes, then says "okay, I think you should start off with slow songs then goes fast in the middle to the end. When starting off with slow and diming the lights, the crowd calms down and focus where the spotlights pointing. Is that okay so far?" She says "yeah that's cool, is that it?" I says "well... I have a few more. You want me to continue?" She says "sure go ahead" and sits down. I stands up and when I stands up, Sean looks up as well, as everybody else. I feel a bit scared, but I figure, I can't stand in one spot. I have to move around, so if my ideas don't sound good at least they feel entertained, so I says "well I'm a bit scared, do yall mind I got to the end of the table side, cause I figure as yall sitting in the middle of the table, I would have have to project voice, so I could know when I'm too nervouse and what I need to do to give myself confidence to continue giving Beyonce my ideas without stopping in the middle." Sean puts his phone down and Ashley says "go boy." Beyonce says "go ahead" I says "okay" I gets to the front and says "okay, I think when the show starts a screen should come down from the ceiling, showing what you experienced in ya life and explaining what it took for you to get here so the fans could feel special for beig there. Afterward, you should sing without the beat, but when you starts singing all the lights go off, then as you sing the screen rise without nobody seeing, so when the lights comes back on, the fans could see you on the stage and stay calm cause the lights dim, where the focus is on you and when you gets to chorus part, the band behind you starts playing Halo and you sings that, but as you singing that, you walk over to the part of the stage, that controls the wind. The wind will be moving slow where, fans think it's the ac and not you, then you stop and say hold on! hold on! this a concert turn the lights on, then you say how yall guys and ladies doing out there. Then the fans gets the chance to scream and act stupid a bit then you run over to the other side of the stage."

I jogs to the other end of the table and says "then Countdown comes on, then you perform it like Sasha do, then when Freakum Dress comes on the lights starts to blinks to different colors as the water mist comes down." I pause then says "I'm guessing in Deja Vu, that's you in it Sean, is that correct?" He says "good guess, yeah," then smiles and looks at his wife. I says "okay well, I think as she doing Freakum Dress, I think you should come on the stage. I don't to mean change the topic, but do yall have a child or two?" Critiquely says "yeah, are you talking about my niece?" I says "well, when you come on the stage and you say hold on! hold on! Beyonce you stops singing and say hold on! from the other end of the stage and say you can't be interrupting me, while I'm performing, what you want?! then Sean, you say listen you doing Freakum Dress as if we don't have a child, then Beyonce you walk over to him as if this wasn't apart of the show then says come here, do you need the pampers?" Sean says "hold on, all that talkin is for what?" I says "cause I think the fans would want a piece of yall relationship experience, then when yall get close, Beyonce you go to the back, to the band as though you looking for something, then Deja Vu beat comes on and you starts saying ya part, by the time Beyonce part comes, she comes back with a bag, but puts its down in the front of the stage cause she have to perform as she performing, when you stop Sean, you picks the bag up and looks in it and pulls a balled up blanket out, but a diaper falls from it, as if it was an accident. You picks it up, looks at the crowd, but the way Sasha performing, they not paying attention to you, but if they is, then you step on the shower water effect and beyonce walks over to you, gives you a kiss on ya cheeks as the beat continues, then you start walking away, Love On Top comes on and that's all I came up with."

Then I sits next to Erica. Beyonce says "that sound interesting, but you talk like you've been watching concerts for a while, then you been listening to music for a while to know where concerts would be at. Is that correct?" I says "I guess, but I only seen P. Diddy when he hosted MTV Awards and how he gave his description to the director before the days of the awards and I only seen that award show. It was very entertainin to me. I liked when the people in the background was jumping around. Did yall see it?" Beyonce says "yeah, hmmm... so what yall about to do So?" Solange says "well we about to get ready." Erica says "do you have a room that he could take a nap it?" I says "I would appreciate that cause I am a bit tired." Sean says "give him the guest room on the second floor." I says "thank you." Critiquely says "okay, lets go" As we about to leave Beyonce stand up and starts to continue to talk to Sean, with her back towards the exit. As I'm passing, I decided to glaze her butt with my right hand, but when she turns around, I'm following Critiquely. Critiquely turns around and says "I didn't appreciate you not answering my question." I says "excuse me ms, but I was trying to tell ya sister about my ideas. I was nervous enough." Erica says "oh would yall please learn to put a sock it, oh my god." Beyonce thinks, I know he didn't just touch my butt, then she smiles a little bit. Sean says "what up B? I thought you was continuing what's wrong?" She turns and says "nothing, he just remind me of somebody. I can't put my finger on it, but his style, I think I know who he is, but I can't think of it at the moment. I know I know him from somewhere." Sean Says "is he a friend of somebody or you had a problem with him?" She says "no, but the way he talked about the concert and says he don't listen to music much, something don't sound right and how he leaves, but I don't know who the person is." Sean says "if you want, I could ask him questions." She says "no don't do that, you come off too aggressive at times cause you from Brooklyn." Sean says "I'm getting hungry, you hungry." She says "yeah, order it while I think."

As we gets to the 2nd floor of the house, I says "okay, so yall about to leave?" Critiquely says "yeah, do you want something to eat or drink?" I says "that's nice of you to offer me that." She says "well once a person comes meet my sister I drops my guard a lil, but I'm still thinking about tonight." I says "okay, I would like an apple and juice or soda." Erica says "I'll get that for you, get comfortable, cause we sleeping in this room okay." I says "okay, so I'm going to sleep 1st and when I wake up I'll eat and drink it." She says "okay" Then I lay down to fall asleep. I wakes up 2 hours later, when I wake up, I hear loud music below me. Ashley walks in the room and says "how I look? Judge me as if I was your girl." I says "okay, I'll try" I looks then says "you look like an exotic deelishous tasty treat like lucky charms marsh mellows. Is that too honest?" Ashleys says "thank you. Critiquel and Erica went to pick up your friend. He texted you when we was gettin our nails done." I says "okay" Ashleys says "try not to be nervous when you get down stairs, but your Mr. Platinum, so I know you'll be fine. I got's to go down stairs to talk to somebody, lata." Then she leaves. I says in my mind, "ah shtt, ah shtt, ok, ok, ok, let me gather my thoughts so as I'm leaving the room, I see Beyonce with a baby in her arms. I says "exuse me, where's the bathroom at?"

She says "follow me." As I'm following her, I'm looking at her butt, when we gets to the bathroom, she turns around and slightly catches me looking at her butt. I says "you and your husband have a cute baby, so when I come out the bathroom, should I go down the stairs over here?" As she smiling a bit, she says "you could go that way, but it leads to the backyard where everybody else is at, but you can go that way, if you want or wait for me to finishe changing Blue Ivy diaper." I says "oh that's your child name?" She says "yeah," I says "I like that name it, sounds original and creative, so I'll see you down stairs." She says "okay" then she leaves. After I use the bathroom, I goes down the stair, I see Ciara and Missy Elliott talking. I look at Ciara, she looks back, but with a second look like she recognize me. She walks over to me and says "I think I know you." I says "I don't think Erica introduced us yet." Ciara smiles and says "so your Mr. Platinum?" I says "yeah, so what you heard about me?" Ciara says "you been treating my sister nice and she likes you a lot." I say "oh, that's cool. You look like you have some pretty shinny soft lips and you smells sweet like ya scent match ya lips, so how do I get in the house from here?" Ciara smile and give me a look, then says "you sure, we never met before?" I says "I don't know, but I'm guessing your friend Missy Elliott waiting to meet me, so when I come back from inside the house, I'll come to you so you could introduce me as Erica man. Is that okay with you?" She laughs a bi and says "yeah that sounds like a plan, cause I know I know you from somewhere, but you coul enter from the side over there." I says "thank you, lata" then I starts walking away, I turns my head a bit to my left to look at her on the corner of my eye, to see what she doing, as I'm looking, she standing there thinkin and Missy walks over and they starts talking.

When I enters the house, it seem like everybody looking at their iphone. I say to myself, this can't be good. As I'm standing their shock, I hear Nicki Minaj says "yo he said, yo read this shtt, wha he said about swirl and his tongue." I says "oh my god." so I walks in the house, calm and cool trying not to laugh, but smiling a bit. Lil Wayne walks over and says "who you here wit?" I looks at him like oh shtt, then says "I'm Ciara, I mean Erica man." He says "oh, your Mr. Plainum." I says "yeah, why you said it like that?" He says "cause Beyonce sister was talking about you and the way she described you when she first met you." then he laughs at bit. I says "Oh her, yeah, got some issues, but quite cute, but I'm taken already." 2 Chainz walks over and says "yo wayan read this shtt." Lil Wayne reads it and says "what... spit in the camera..." I decides to walk away looking for Ashley, then says "this shtt is crazy." 
As I'm looking around, I see Diddy talking to a person. I walks over and says "pardon me, but Sean, did you have a long way to go?" Diddy says "what? Do I know you?" I says "your name is Sean right?" He says "yeah." I says "Sean Carter right?" He says "no, he's up stairs." I says "oh" then walks away. As I makes an attempt to look back a bit, Ashley says "Mr. Platinum, Erica want to talk to you a bit." I turns my head and says "oh" When I get the phone, I says "hello" Critiquely says "we got your friend, so I'm going to ask him so questions okay, wanna talk to him a bit?" I says "yeah, put him on."

Ashley stares at me as I wait. Corey gets on the phone and says "so, Critiquely is cute, what you doing?" I says "mingling, did you do that of what I ask you to do earlier today?" Corey says "of course, but why you told me to do that?" I says "yo, code double real recognize entertainment." Ashley says "what that mean?" Corey says "oh word, iight, do yours and I'll continue." I hangs up the phone, Corey says "yeah... iight, I'll tell ya girl that. Yeah, um... don't tell me I'll ask... ok lata." Critiquely says "so your going to make me empty today?" Corey says "do you want that? like when you really think about it, what it means to you?" Erica says "I didn't tell her what it is yet, so I'm gonna allow you to explain." Corey says "well, I think I should wait till tonight cause I want to get to know you better first, is that okay with you Critiquelu?" She says "so okay, we where." He says "dam we got here fast." She looks back and says "what's my name?" He says "dam, you have some pretty eyes, I meant to ask you think, but are you talking to somebody, cause a girl as fine as you, I feel too lucky to be with." She smiles and says "really?" He says "yea" She says "okay, thank you, so what's my name?" He says "why should that matter? why you can't wait till we have some privacy and you pressure me? Like I feel a bit strange with you not saying happy birthday to me." She says "today's ya b day?" He says "yeah" She says "yeah, happy b day, lets go inside." As Ashley showing me around, I see's Corey and says "I'll be back," but as I walks to him, I gets distracted by Lil Kim. She says "excuse me can I leand on you for a second to fix my shoe?"

I says "sure Denise" As she fixing it, she says "what you said?" Then when she finish fixing her shoe she looks me directly in the eyes and says "go ahead and answer it." I smiles and says "you look decent, sure, so what's ya name?" she says "you don't listen to Hip-Hop and R&B?" I says "no not really, why is you a music artist?" She smiles and says "I can't help it, but ya look so familiar, you from Brookyn?" I says "yeah, Crown Heights. Where you from, Bed-Stuy or somewhere?" She laughs and says "you guessed that?" I says "yeah cause it seems like only Bed-Stuy individuals able to spot Crown Heights individuals pretty quick without noticin it, but I like ya dess and hair style, so where ya man at?" She says "why you trying to bag me?" I says "I ask cause you look too good to be alone." Lil Kim says "thank you" Her phones rings and she starts talking "yo what? huh... again? what he said now?" I decide to wait to see if I could her what they talking about. She says "okay, I'm about to check right now." She goes to her Twitter page and says "look at this, this guy, talkin mad sexy shtt to me, it's gettin to a point where I'm startin to feel like I need to set him straight, look he said he wanna make me a water bed, do you know what that means?" then she looks at me. Erica says "Babe! come here." I look over and says "oh, that's my girl" then Iooks at Lil Kim and says "it was nice meeting you."

She says "okay, you too" Then I continue to walk, as I get a bit closer, I see Rihanna talking to Nicki Minaj with her back turned, so as I'm passing I glaze her butt and continues to walk. Before she fully gets to me, I gets to my girl and Erica says "Rihanna this my man Mr. Platinum." She says "oh... that's ya man, okay, nice to meet you. You look so familiar." Nicki Minaj walks over and says "hello... Rihanna read this." Rihanna looks and says "... hiding... a disappearing at... if you me come and get me... stop being lazy and make an effort to create something, Yo this mother fucker talks so much shtt. I
I think I just might have to see him and give him a piece of my mind. Nicki, but look at this shtt." She reads, then says "welcome to not my flirt, but foreplay, iight, I'm gonna do some research, somebody know him," Nicki says "go to Diddy cause they had as argument about a number and he might could do it."